tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8638994951862489732.post7725146931705877979..comments2023-10-30T05:29:22.388-07:00Comments on Coffee & Critique Writers Group: It Was The Best of Lines, It Was The Worst of Lines: How Important is the First Line of Your Novel?zeldadghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10798725703113239728noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8638994951862489732.post-23678721348507501192008-03-24T17:41:00.000-07:002008-03-24T17:41:00.000-07:00By then paper will be obsolete.And if my printer d...By then paper will be obsolete.<BR/><BR/>And if my printer doesn't stop eating paper and sucking the ink out of cartridges, it may meet its maker before I do.<BR/><BR/>P.S. That line could work... The sky was black and filled with turbluence and a cranky old witch swirling around on her broomstick.Tricia Sandershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05509141410811113348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8638994951862489732.post-34328835105629315882008-03-24T14:41:00.000-07:002008-03-24T14:41:00.000-07:00LOL - Bring it to the workshop and we'll rewrite. ...LOL - Bring it to the workshop and we'll rewrite. "The sky was black and filled with turbulence." <BR/><BR/>I can't believe you're taking your lap top with you into the great beyond. What about your printer? The printer always gets left out.zeldadghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10798725703113239728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8638994951862489732.post-36036933341856525412008-03-24T13:57:00.000-07:002008-03-24T13:57:00.000-07:00It was a dark and stormy night...Oh, wait. That o...It was a dark and stormy night...<BR/><BR/>Oh, wait. That one is taken. Darn that Snoopy.<BR/><BR/>It was a light and breezy day...Tricia Sandershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05509141410811113348noreply@blogger.com